Pixar Storyboard Class Week 3: The Force Will Be With You, Always

Academy of Art University, ANM 499, Kristen Lester, Pixar Storyboard Class, Storyboard Class, Storyboarding, Storyboards

This semester I am taking ANM 499 Digital Storyboarding for Feature Animation with Pixar Story Artist Kristen Lester. I am chronicling my experience on the blog for myself and for those interested in learning more about storytelling. I highly recommend trying your hand at the assignments we were given, as well as watching the films assigned. Happy boarding!

*In order to fully discuss Kristen’s notes, I detail events that occurred in the films we watch. Watch the film, then read on to see how we analyzed the film. And you should watch the film, because this week we watched Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope.

Hello Dear Readers!

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Yes you read that title right – for our homework assignment, we watched Star Wars. Yep, that is why I am paying the big bucks to be in art school. All you poor business majors have to write reports. I get to talk about Luke Skywalker. Nah nah nah.

Why Star Wars? Well by now I hope that many of you have read or are currently reading
The Hero With A Thousand Faces by Joseph Campbell.

Star Wars is the seminal hero’s journey. Classic storytelling. At its time, Kristen told us, no one had ever told a story this way before. Hard to believe, as it seems like every summer blockbuster is told this way, but someone had to start, and that someone was George Lucas.

 

 

 

STAR WARSNow this movie holds a special place in my heart, because I did not see it in its entirety until I was 16. I saw Return of the Jedi numerous times on NBC (thank you NBC Sunday Night Movie!) and Dad recorded The Empire Strikes Back from HBO. In fact, our first VHS copy of Empire was so old and overplayed that the first ten minutes of the film were practically unwatchable — pale dudes wearing white on an ice planet fighting snow monsters on a VHS tape where the color had bleeded out. YIKES. So I knew those films, but not the original. In fact, this assignment marks the SECOND time that I saw Star Wars Episode IV. But it will not be the last.

One of the great things about this film is that the entire world is set up before we even meet Luke. We meet almost everyone else first, but then when we meet Luke, we can tell by the music and scenery that he is our main guy.

Kristen used the film to clearly define the pinnacle of screenwriting and filmic storytelling, the Three Act Structure.  (Cue John Williams’ fanfare here.)

ACT ONE

Act I defines these important questions:

Who?
What?
Where?
When?

It establishes the intro and the setup (A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…) It also establishes the characters and their relationships, their back stories, and the character’s expectations for their futures.  For example, we learn that Luke Skywalker lives on a desert planet with his aunt and uncle, that his father was killed by the Empire, and that he longs to join the academy and fight the Empire for the freedom of the galaxy. And that he would rather get power converters than tend to a moisture farm.

Luke looks across the barren landscape of Tatoonie, longing for adventure.

Luke looks across the barren landscape of Tatoonie, longing for adventure.

Act I also establishes the INCITING INCIDENT. This sets the story in motion. It changes the character’s sense of self, disrupts their plans for the future, and forces them to deal with something because their sense of the world has changed. In Luke’s case, meeting R2D2 and C3PO leads him to discover the distress call from Princess Leia, which leads him to search for Old Ben, aka Obi Wan Kenobi, which leads him off of Tatoonie and onto adventure.

In Toy Story, this is Buzz’s arrival to Andy’s room, causing Woody to soon be replaced as the alpha toy. In my previous post from ANM 372 Storyboarding class, in A Cake Story, this is when the chemical spills on the box of cake ingredients in the delivery truck.

Often the Inciting Incident is a new set piece, like when the Green Army Men in Toy Story leave Andy’s room. So if you look for a new environment, you’ll often see the Inciting Incident.

Also, this often occurs on page 10. If you are familiar with screenplays, you may have noticed this. It’s not always on page 10, but if it hasn’t happened by page 25 you’re movie may be in trouble.

Next in Act I is the First Act Break – this happens when circumstances change and something makes the character make a choice. In the case of Star Wars, Luke is on the fence about joining Obi Wan until he returns home and sees the charred remains of his aunt and uncle. He cannot go home again, he can only move forward. He must make a choice.

And this leads to the problem many stories face – if the character does not make choices, the movie will not work. So if you’re movie is boring, ask yourself “is my character making choices, or are things just randomly happening to them?” Because the choices your character makes will lead them to their goals, and the established goal in Act I will ultimately lead to the global goal of the entire film.

Next: ACT TWO

In this act, our hero pursues his or her goal through increasingly difficult obstacles. This leads to the MIDPOINT, which:

– Changes the direction of the story – for example, we’ve been led to believe that once the Droids reach Alderan, all will be well. But then Darth Vader using the Death Star destroys the entire planet. What will Luke and his cohorts do now?

– Raises the stakes – With the planet destroyed, Obi Wan’s worst fears are realized, the rebel plans cannot be delivered to Leia’s father, and all may be lost.

– May prove to be a false victory. As an example, think of Monsters University. After Mike wins the scare games, we think the movie is over. Au contraire.

This brings us to the Second Act Break:

– Setback in the global goal of the film

– Forces the stakes to be raised even higher – there’s not turning back now. And these stakes are often external, internal and philosophical.

For Luke, the stakes are win the day or be destroyed by the Death Star. Even worse, what will happen to the ethos of the movie? Will evil triumph? Is evil right and good wrong? Hard to believe things will go well when you see our mentor cut down in front of you by a guy in a black suit and a weezing problem.

This is also when the Evil Character often states their view of the world, i.e. We meet again, you will never defeat me, you have no hope, etc. etc. The Villain will pose a question to the hero, a question that the hero will be at a loss to answer. That he/she can’t answer…yet, because the hero does not yet know the answer.

For example, in Toy Story 3 (aka the film that makes me weep openly-farewell my childhood) Lotso asks Woody at the dump if he (Andy) loves you so much, then why are you here? Woody does not yet have an answer for the horribly cruel bear.

ACT THREE

Resolution of the story and its subplots!

It is here that your questions are answered.

Climax

– the hero’s POV of the world changes.

– the hero achieves an epiphany, one that enables him or her to answer the question posed by the villain at the end of the Second Act break

– main tensions are brought to their most dramatic point

In the final battle scene, when Luke and the Rebels fight the Death Star, we are at the edge of our seats. Will Biggs take down the Death Star? No! His X-Wing is shot to bits! Will Wedge succeed? No! It’s up to Luke. But wait, will he use the targeting computer, or listen to the disembodied voice of his mentor and trust in THE FORCE? Luke stops messing around and completes his journey – he defeats the Death Star and becomes The HERO.

Resolution – Wrap Up Party and stuff that will be in the sequel

Everyone is safe and happy – they’re in casual wear, the angles of the all the buildings are straight and flat, the world is safe. Luke and Han get medals (no medal for the Wookie? Travesty!) They smile for the audience, cut to credits and epic music. The End.

Next week, we are watching one of my all time favorite films ever Raiders of the Lost Ark. Then the next week, we are watching a film that is not my favorite, Kingdom of the Crystal Skull, to see how it went off the rails. (Hint – doesn’t quite follow the Hero’s Journey).

And now…onto the STORYBOARDS!

So last week we were assigned the hashtag #awkwardpromstory featured on Late Night with Jimmy Fallon’s Hastag Wednesdays.

Below is my story:

Prom01

 

Prom02

 

Prom03

 

Prom04

 

Prom05

 

Prom06

 

Prom07

I received a positive response from Kristen and my class. Then, Kristen gave me some excellent suggestions to improve the compositions and the story:

 

Kristen liked the opening shot a lot and recommended making it even easier for people to read. She suggested drawing a grid, crosshatching the mirror ball, adding shine, and setting the stage higher up. And she thought the banners were awesome.

Kristen liked the opening shot a lot and recommended making it even easier for people to read. She suggested drawing a grid, crosshatching the mirror ball, adding shine, and setting the stage higher up. And she thought the banners were awesome.

 

 

Show that the dudes are REALLY alone by placing dancing couples in the foreground. This makes them look like even bigger losers. This also reinforces the MOST IMPORTANT STORY POINT - these guys are ALONE.

Show that the dudes are REALLY alone by placing dancing couples in the foreground. This makes them look like even bigger losers. This also reinforces the MOST IMPORTANT STORY POINT – these guys are ALONE.

 

This shot more clearly shows what is happening - a rubberband shooting out of the guy's mouth.

This shot more clearly shows what is happening – a rubber band shooting out of the guy’s mouth.

 

Comedy is better flat. Kristen recommended I break up this scene into two panels to better convey the action. A Rube Goldberg scenario occurs as the rubber band hits a woman, causing her to spit in a guy's face, he falls back against a woman' who spills her drink on a guy...

Comedy is better flat. Kristen recommended I break up this scene into two panels to better convey the action. A Rube Goldberg scenario occurs as the rubber band hits a woman, causing her to spit in a guy’s face, he falls back against a woman’ who spills her drink on a guy…

 

...then the guy falls back into the table, launching the punch bowl...

…then the guy falls back into the table, launching the punch bowl…

 

...sending the punch bowl flying into the Prom Queen and King. Kristen recommended I make this a downshot so that we see the action from the bowl's POV, making it more dramatic.

…sending the punch bowl flying into the Prom Queen and King. Kristen recommended I make this a downshot so that we see the action from the bowl’s POV, making it more dramatic.

 

And then - UPSHOT! More exciting as we see the Prom Queen's face as she reacts.

And then – UPSHOT! More exciting as we see the Prom Queen’s face as she reacts.

 

And then this shot - we see the Prom Queen glowing with power and the crowd's reaction of what transpired - she stopped the frickin' punch bowl in MIDAIR. What???

And then this shot – we see the Prom Queen glowing with power and the crowd’s reaction of what transpired – she stopped the frickin’ punch bowl in MIDAIR. What???

 

Then we cut back to our Dudes, who look in astonishment. And the one says "Dude. Glad I didn't ask her out."

Then we cut back to our Dudes, who look in astonishment. And the one says “Dude. Glad I didn’t ask her out.”

And there you have it – two versions to the same story, the second with clearer compositions, making for a more engaging story. In them, we show reactions, and a way for the audience to FEEL what is happening.

For our next homework assignment, we drew a word out of an envelope and boarded out images to convey that word. You’ll see my boards and my word next time.

Star Wars photos courtesy of herocomplex.latimes.com, www.thereformedbroker.com and abcnews.go.com

Drawing for Features Storyboarding ANM 372 Week 3: A Cake Story

Academy of Art University, ANM 372, Storyboard Class, Storyboarding, Storyboards

This semester I am taking ANM 372 Drawing for Features Storyboarding with Disney Story Artist Tamara Lusher-Stocker. I am chronicling my experience on the blog for myself and for those interested in learning more about storytelling. I highly recommend trying your hand at the assignments we were given. Happy boarding!

Greetings Storyboard Fans,

Last week we showcased our character that we drew from life and expanded to give them life and depth. As you may remember, I created Imogene, a character based on a young woman I saw at the Walt Disney Family Museum.

Tamara instructed us to create a storyboard about our character baking a cake. Sky’s the limit. A cake needed to be involved – the rest was up to our ample imaginations.

So naturally I turned it into an action adventure horror story about two people in love battling a cake monster. Because you know, that’s what I do. Actually, my original story was much more pedestrian – a young woman baking a cake for her husband and failing in spectacularly comic fashion. Her bike messenger husband comes home with Chinese and they spend the night lounging on the couch watching TV. The end.

Sounded cute in my head, but boarding it proved boring. And who wants to board something dull, right?

As I worked out a more interesting scenario for myself, I thought of the cake monster. Eureka! This led to a wealth of ideas. A creature lurking in the shadows. Moody lighting. Horror film tropes. This iconic shot served as the turning point for me:

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Alien01

Alien02

Alien03I ended up not using the shots in the final boards, as they didn’t fit the story. You have to kill your darlings sometimes. But the story is better for it — it served as a good backdrop.

In the story, Imogene, our heroine, owns a bake shop and Yohei, a delivery guy, accidently delivers a box of ingredients that have been contaminated by a chemical of unknown origins. My teacher Tamara and my classmates gave me excellent suggestions to improve my story for Round 2. Click on the arrow on the right of each panel to see the story unfold, as well as read the suggestions from Tamara and my classmates.

Next week, we are boarding a scene from Spider-Man, but instead of Peter Parker, our characters are a Dragon and a Talent Scout. Tamara encouraged us to really push the characters, making them super broad and cartoony. You’ll see what I come up with next week.

Drawing for Features Storyboarding ANM 372 Week 2: Character

Academy of Art University, ANM 372, Figure Drawing, Storyboard Class, Storyboarding, Storyboards

This semester I am taking ANM 372 Drawing for Features Storyboarding with Disney Story Artist Tamara Lusher-Stocker. I am chronicling my experience on the blog for myself and for those interested in learning more about storytelling. I highly recommend trying your hand at the assignments we were given. Happy boarding!

“Get the audience by the throat. Don’t let them escape. Don’t wake them up. Don’t let them stop and realize ‘this is only a movie.'” – Billy Wilder

Today we showcased the character we found from life and expanded upon for our upcoming storyboard assignment.

While at the Walt Disney Family Museum last weekend I saw a fascinating young woman wearing an electric blue fluffy bear hat, a Wizard of Oz style Dorothy Gale dress, purple tights and motorcycle boots. The moment I saw her I knew I found my muse.

Wearing purple tights and a blue hat are bold choices. One decides to dress that way, that style does not randomly happen upon a person. I imagined her to be a creative, fun, Zooey Deschenel type of woman. In my mind, she loves eclectic fashion, her Etsy site where she sells her own creations, animals, playing guitar, wears her heart on her sleeve and spends little time on the phone. Here are my ideas for my character:

 

Imogene Expressions 2

Imogene Expressions 1

Imogene expressions 1

Imogene expressions 2

Imogene standing

Imogene standing

Imogene sketches

Imogene sketches

Imogene meets a fluffy friend

Imogene meets a fluffy friend

Imogene sews

Imogene sews

Imogene argues with her phone

Imogene argues with her phone

Imogene holds an umbrella

Imogene holds an umbrella

After each person in the class showed their character, Tamara gave us our assignment – our character baking a cake in 40 to 60 panels.

We also gleaned some words of wisdom to aid us in our quest.
Some excellent rules to live by:

To Be A Great Story Artist, You Need To…

1. Use your draftsmanship. Draw everything. Everywhere. All the time. Draw, draw, draw.
2. Draw AND discuss film language. Know what different shots mean and when to use them.
3. Act – you are an actor with a pencil.
4. Write – understand story structure and how to tell a visually compelling dramatic story.
5. Have a keen eye and ear. You know how Pinocchio is timeless while a lot of direct to DVD films out now have a shelf life of six months? Learn how to tap into the human psyche without being the hot thing of the moment.
6. Be flexible and humble. Carol Kieffer Police said something excellent at the Walt Disney Museum yesterday: “your plans are always meant to humble you in the end.” Things will not always go as planned. Your great idea may be ripped off the wall and tossed in the trash. Roll with it. Know when the bigger story is more important than your one cool scene.

We also discussed different types of boards, of which there are three:

1. Beat Boards – these are panels or illustrations that show the scope of an entire film. These are the fancy ones you often see in all those beautiful hard cover art of books.

2. Pitch Boards – panels that represent all the changes that occur within a film, including film shots and character emotional changes. I learned something cool here too – the more boards to show an action the slower the action will seem. The fewer the number of boards the faster the action will seem.

3. Continuity boards for an animatic or story reel – panels that play together as an animatic. A good example is the “100 mile Dash” sequence in the special features of The Incredibles.

For next week I’ll show my boards for our first assignment I call “A Cake Story.”

Until next time…

Andreas Deja and Carol Kieffer Police at the Walt Disney Family Museum

Andreas Deja, Animation, Carol Kieffer Police, Walt Disney Family Museum

On Saturday I had the great pleasure of meeting Andreas Deja and Carol Kieffer Police at the Walt Disney Family Museum. This Museum is one of the treasures of the Bay Area. If you have not been you must take the trek out to the Presidio. They offer classes and events every weekend, film screenings, a terrific museum, and the staff is delightful.

Andreas Deja, Carol Kieffer Police, Women in Animation San Francisco

Carol Kieffer Police, Andreas Deja, myself, and several of the great members of the WIA-SF.

I wrote about the event for the Women in Animation San Francisco blog. You can read about their entertaining talk here.

Drawing for Features Storyboarding ANM 372 Week 1: Life Drawing

Academy of Art University, ANM 372, Figure Drawing, Life Drawing, Storyboard Class, Storyboarding, Storyboards, Uncategorized

Hello good webizens! Today I am showcasing my second storyboarding class, Animation 372: Storyboarding for Feature Animation. That’s right, this semester I am taking not one, but two storyboard classes. I am exceedingly pleased with this semester. As a storyboard major, I am finally taking the courses most interesting to me: STORYBOARDING. For FILM no less. Although both of my courses have to deal with storyboarding for feature animation, I am learning some different things in each one. And each of my excellent professors has their own unique way of teaching.

Disney, ILM and Pixar artist Tamara Lusher-Stocker teaches this course. Her filmography includes The Lion King, Home on the Range, Dinosaur, Treasure Planet, and Escape from Planet Earth.

On our first day of class she introduced herself, then the five of us (that’s right, only five students – stellar! Personal attention!) discussed our goals. Everyone in our class is a storyboard major and three of us will soon graduate, so we will be able to showcase our thesis project during the class.

For our first class, we discussed some of the similarities and differences between boarding for TV, live action and feature animation.

TV Animation

As everyone who has ever watched the credits of an animated program knows, most TV animation is not actually animated in the states. For this reason, storyboard artists must be extremely precise. The boards are often used by overseas animators as key frames for their animation, so accuracy is a must.

Live Action

Live action boards serve as a blue print for complicated shots. You want to make sure that the angle of that explosion looks just right before the truck drives under the bridge you’re going to blow up. The point is to give the director exactly what they’re looking for, to draw realistic characters, and often arrows are shown to where the action is going (although I hear this is starting to go away since most everything is put into an animatic now).

Feature Animation

You’re creating the entire film with boards and making a story reel, or animatic, that will show exactly how the movie will be played. No arrows here.

Most importantly one should draw loose and communicate quickly. There’s no time to noodle boards to make them beautiful. You’ll be drawing way to many of them to get attached to any one in particular.

Like in Kristen’s class, we also discussed Joseph Campbell’s The Hero’s Journey (seriously, read this book. It explains A LOT and you’ll find how many of your favorite films use the formula pretty accurately). We also discussed stereotypes, empathy, acting, and the importance of using a strong silhouette.

We practiced modeling and drawing each other in preparation for our homework.

Here are my drawings of my classmates:

Classmate 1 Classmate 2

Classmate 3

Next we watched interesting clips from The Incredibles and Monsters Inc. in order to get a better sense of character design and structure. Then we tried our hand at drawing our own crazy creatures.

Trying out different ideas, I thought of the idea of something cute and squat with glasses.

Trying out different ideas, I thought of the idea of something cute and squat with glasses.

Working off the original idea, I made my monster girl a little bigger and made her into a workout junkie.

Working off the original idea, I made my monster girl a little bigger and made her into a workout junkie.

Expanding on the theme, I made her even taller, and decided that she enjoyed swimming.

Expanding on the theme, I made her even taller, and decided that she enjoyed swimming.

My last sketch, I gave her a 50s retro swim suit and gave her the lifelong ambition of being on the swim team -- in spite of her flaming hair.

My last sketch, I gave her a 50s retro swim suit and gave her the lifelong ambition of being on the swim team — in spite of her flaming hair.

Finally, we took our last model and were encouraged to tell a story with the character, making the model into some type of creature.
Here are my three processes:

The Original Sketch with a little newt added for fun.

The Original Sketch with a little newt added for fun.

I turned the character into a witch and moved the newt so that he became an unfortunate prince floating in the air.

I turned the character into a witch and moved the newt so that he became an unfortunate prince floating in the air.

A cleaned up version of sketch two with a little more detail.

A cleaned up version of sketch two with a little more detail.

For our first homework assignment, Tamara instructed us to draw three life drawings of a single person from life, five drawings of them participating in an activity, three head studies, and one drawing of them on the phone. She encouraged us to pick someone fascinating, as our first storyboard will revolve around this character.
You’ll see who I chose in Week 2.

Bon Nuit!

San Francisco Zoo Sketches

Animal Drawing, Animals, Life Drawing, San Francisco Zoo

I LOVE the zoo. Of course you know this devoted blog followers. Here are even more animals for your viewing amusement. I particularly like the anteater, my favorite animal at the zoo.

Anteater

Anteater

Hippo taking a swim

Hippo taking a swim

Polar Bear and Penguin Pals

Polar Bear and Penguin Pals

Ostrich Studies 1

Ostrich Studies 1

Ostrich Studies 2

Ostrich Studies 2

Ostrich Studies 3

Ostrich Studies 3

Rhino enjoying lunch

Rhino enjoying lunch

Rhino Studies 1

Life on the BART Sketches

BART, BART drawings, Figure Drawing, Life Drawing

I enjoy drawing people on BART. However, people on BART, look up from your phone once in a while. We are permanently attached to our phones. Phone zombies if you will.

Woman holding onto strap

Woman holding onto strap

Woman checking her phone

Woman checking her phone

Guy holding onto BART with bike

Guy holding onto BART with bike

Woman checking her phone

Woman checking her phone

Woman on the Platform

Woman on the Platform

Guy with bike 3

Guy with bike 3

Guy with bike 2

Guy with bike 2

Guy with Bike 1

This guy was cool. He looked like a bike messenger on a mission.

Man checking phone 2

Man checking phone 2

Woman checking her phone

Woman checking her phone

Man checking his phone

Man checking his phone

Woman listening to music

One of my favorite drawings – I love how effortless she looks.

Woman sitting checking her phone

Woman sitting checking her phone

Walt Disney Family Museum Cute Farm Animal Drawings

Animal Drawing, Animals, Figure Drawing, Life Drawing, Walt Disney Family Museum

Saturday I went to the Walt Disney Family Museum and drew some of the cutest farm animals ever. Love animals.

The Walt Disney Family Museum

The Walt Disney Family Museum

2 Goats

2 Goats

Pony

Pony

Goat and Pony

Goat and Pony

Sheep and Chicken

Sheep and Chicken

This pig was adorable. I love the pig.

Sheep and Bunny

Sheep and Bunny

Bunny and Pig Studies

Bunny and Pig Studies

Sheep and Chicken Studies

Sheep and Chicken Studies

Sheep and Bunny Studies

Sheep and Bunny Studies

Bunny and Duck Studies

Bunny and Duck Studies

Guy photographing the animals

Guy photographing the animals

Now this woman was amazing. She had a bright blue hat, a Dorothy of Oz dress, purple tights and motorcycle boots. Cool Cool Cool. You'll see her again in a future post.

Now this woman was amazing. She had a bright blue hat, a Dorothy of Oz dress, purple tights and motorcycle boots. Cool Cool Cool. You’ll see her again in a future post.

Cool Woman with Hat 2

Cool Woman with Hat 2

Cool Woman with Hat 3

Cool Woman with Hat 3

The real deal

The real deal

The Goat

The Sheep

The Sheep

Pixar Storyboard Class Week 2: Economy of Storytelling

Academy of Art University, ANM 499, Kristen Lester, Pixar, Pixar Storyboard Class, Storyboarding, Storyboards

This semester I am taking ANM 499 Digital Storyboarding for Feature Animation with Pixar Story Artist Kristen Lester. I am chronicling my experience on the blog for myself and for those interested in learning more about storytelling. I highly recommend trying your hand at the assignments we were given, as well as watching the films assigned. Happy boarding!

*In order to fully discuss Kristen’s notes, I detail events that occurred in the films we watch. Watch the film, then read on to see how we analyzed the film.

Image courtesy of http://moviescreenshots.blogspot.com

Today we started class watching the montage scene from The Hudsucker Proxy. An excellent film released in 1994 written by Joel and Ethan Coen and Sam Raimi, The Hudsucker Proxy chronicles the rise, fall and rise again of Norville, played by Tim Robbins, an idealistic young man fresh out of Muncie College of Business Administration. He has an excellent idea “you know, for kids!” that he wants to share with the world that becomes the hula hoop. It’s like watching a live action cartoon, and proved to be a great movie to analyze. There are many excellent sequences that propel the story forward.

Some of the take aways Kristen mentioned were to have a scene ask a question, then give an answer. For example, in the Proving Room scene, we first see men behind giant windows, then we see men in hazmat suits jumping behind sandbags. We are asking ourselves “What is a proving room?” “What’s with the hazmat suit guys?” Then the camera cuts to a mannaquin with a bomb strapped to him and a hula hoop around the waist. We realize they are going to blow up the mannequin to see what happens to the hoop. The filmmakers could have showed the mannequin first, but they instead opted for us to ask a question, then the answer is revealed later.

In the same montage scene, the shopkeeper throws out all the hula hoop, and the red one rolls through the street on a magical journey to the footsteps of a small boy. We watch the event that eventually pans down to the hula hoop’s POV, as though we are the hoop itself. In this way we are like both the hula hoop and, in a way, Norville, we just want someone to believe in us. We, (the hula hoop) want to reach our full potential.

The montage works because it conveys a lot of information in a condensed period of time. It is a story within a story.

Next, we learned a set of useful terms to help us in our storytelling process.

1. PROGRESSION

Always have something build to something else. Ask yourself, is every shot giving a new piece of information that’s adding to the story? Each shot should have its own moment, an opportunity to build humor, intensity or emotion for example. Also, the emphasis should have the most contrast.

2. ECONOMY OF STORYTELLING

Why say it in 5 shots when you can say it in 3? Why not 1? Always try to move the story forward.

3. CLARITY

This refers to clarity of the idea, not the drawing. Rough sketches are fine as long as they convey the story point. A beautiful drawing is pointless if the story doesn’t shine through. Again, does every scene work?

4. STRUCTURE

How are you telling your story? For this, we briefly discussed The Hero With A Thousand Faces by Joseph Campbell. Glove and Boots made a fun video about it too. We didn’t mention the Glove and Boots film in class but I love it so here you go:

 

5. ENTERTAINMENT

Ultimately, everything you’ve done is for naught if the story is not something that people want to watch. Are there interesting and unexpected reversals? Good staging? Our job as filmmakers is to entertain and educate. That’s why we shell out the bucks for movie tickets.

Last and certainly not least, we each pitched our homework assignment from last week.

Our assignment was to take this image:

HomeworkAssn

And create a story using only 6 cuts and no more than 30 images. She allowed us to use B and C cuts so you can ignore that part at the end of the image. Everyone submitted very imaginative stories. She emphasized the necessity of making appealing drawings that are loose so that we focus on who the story is about and their POV rather than an omnisicient POV. She also discussed the importance of putting the camera in the best place to tell the story and paying attention to the 180 rule, which everyone breaks from time to time. The 180 Rule, of the Rule of Left to Right, can be remembered this way: if a character is on the right, they should always be on the right. This will keep you from crossing the line. Kristen went through all of our stories, one by one, and shortened them. Cut out the fat. It was amazing. Turns out you don’t need that many drawings to tell a story at all.

For example, here is my original story:

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And here it is after Kristen’s cuts:

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You get the same meaning in fewer shots. Still exciting, fewer drawings, story point is still intact. This is the essence of economy of storytelling – simplifying the story into ONLY the images you need. AMAZING. And time saving.

For our second assignment, we are using Late Night Hashtags by the one and only Jimmy Fallon, my favorite talk show host and future host of The Tonight Show. Our assignment was to turn the following hashtag into an amusing story in 10 images or less:

@longdoug35

My friend yawned and a rubber band from his braces shot out of his mouth and hit a lady in the face. #awkwardpromstory

You can watch the whole clip here:

You’ll see my story in the next post! ‘Til next time storyboarders…

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